1. Line edit, journal article

In this excerpt, most major changes involved fine-tuning sentence structure for effective communication — that is, attending to what information a sentence inherently emphasizes, and how phrase placement within a sentence interplays with the lines before and after.

Publication: Zhou, X., Tong, W., & Li, D. (2019). Modeling Housing Rent in the Atlanta Metropolitan Area Using Textual Information and Deep Learning. ISPRS International Journal of Geo-Information, 8(8), 349.

2. Line edit, thesis chapter

Broadly, edits in this excerpt were made with an eye to smoothing out relatively stilted phrasing, improving flow and progression, and trimming redundancy from the text.

Publication: Wang, Y., Ma, R., Liu, F., Lee, S. A., & Zhang, L. (2018). Modulation of Gut Microbiota: A Novel Paradigm of Enhancing the Efficacy of Programmed Death-1 and Programmed Death Ligand-1 Blockade Therapy. Frontiers in immunology, 9, 374. https://doi.org/10.3389/fimmu.2018.00374